Wednesday, June 3, 2009

The Coffeeclub's Rhyme




Hello everyone,as you know,i was posted about "how if we make a poem together"( Let’s Get Rhyme ), and it actually turns out really good,where each everyone of you sent out your line that actually rhyme.

I thank you very much for those simple,lovely,rhyming line and appreciated your time.


So, I decided to get that line all together and here are the result

I hope you will enjoy it as much as i do


*cheers*


"From tweet to friendship"


I have my morning, i grab my coffee cup,

I log on to twitter to see what's up

Saw Milana with the coffee cup,

I want to play but first must walk my pup.

But then I saw the action over at #coffeclub,

I had to tweet "Whazzup!"



I have my morning as I grab my coffee cup,
and I watch the sunrise continue to pop up,
and whisper the colors of love,
to remind me of what I have


I put my smile, I know that you will be there,

but later i realized, fail whale didn't let me in there

Now that I am here, why do you have to fear ?

all i want everyone to do is cheer* cheer* cheer*


I have my morning as I grab my coffee cup,
and I watch the sunrise continue to pop up,
and whisper the colors of love,
to remind me of what I have


Instead of coffee, can I have a beer?

Over here, beer is nowhere to find my dear..

If you want coffee we are here to share.

Yup, coffee is what we share,

still if you ask for beer,

i guess none of us will spare


I have my morning as I grab my coffee cup,
and I watch the sunrise continue to pop up,
and whisper the colors of love,
to remind me of what I have


With the coffee and the tweet, we stomp our feet,

we retweet and retweet to show our feat,

knowing as we do, that nothing can touch this beautiful beat.

I feel the beat, smell the roasted beans so sweet,

wanting to share it so I will retweet, and pass along this joyful treat.


I have my morning as I grab my coffee cup,
and I watch the sunrise continue to pop up,
and whisper the colors of love,
to remind me of what I have


I do feel my beat,

when i tweet and retweet along with the taste of my coffee so sweet.

All this talk about "beat", I should learn to dance, I really have "two left feet"

My two left feet have begun a dance,

as I hold my coffee cup in one hand,

and in the other I hold up my pants.


I have my morning as I grab my coffee cup,
and I watch the sunrise continue to pop up,
and whisper the colors of love,
to remind me of what I have


Should i reach out for you, to help you stand?

because i am your friend,

with the friendship that this world seems to understand

Understand that we are friends,

through good times and the bad,

someone who shares the things you do, the happy as well as the sad

You sip your coffee, and talk of things,

that such a friendship surely brings


I have my morning as I grab my coffee cup,
and I watch the sunrise continue to pop up,
and whisper the colors of love,
to remind me of what I have




Refrain courtesy of : Sir John

To see all the line contributor, you can check it out here : Let’s Get Rhyme

Image credit : Bird Tweets

5 comments:

Adrence on June 3, 2009 at 1:48 PM said...

A nice piece of work. Gonna give you guys some credit for this!!! The best poem I ever read so far about coffee. Haha. Excellent work guy. Have a great day everyone! :P

maikeru76 on June 3, 2009 at 2:11 PM said...

"But then I saw the action over at #coffeclub,

I had to tweet "Whazzup!" - That's my contribution (I think)

Mil@n@ on June 4, 2009 at 10:04 AM said...

@Adrence : thank you and you may join some other time (^_^)

@Maikeru76 : yep! those are yours,thank you (^^,) and we will do this again next time,hows that?


FYI: as mentioned above,to check the contributor of each line, do click on the link of the previous post "Let's Get Rhyme"
because if i post everyone names on each line, it will ruin the beauty of those stanza.
Thank you

*cheers*

Sudha on June 6, 2009 at 3:06 PM said...

Wow Milana the Rhyme is awesome!! Kudos for your effort! (^^,)

Arun Basil Lal on June 6, 2009 at 6:16 PM said...

@rmilana:

wow that was great, great rhyming words.
@all:

save this poem, when we have kids, we can sing it when they ask for a song.. :)

[ Wonder how I would be singing, craw craw ]

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